All Comments on 'Study Buddies Ch. 01'

Good start. but don't stop here as there are endless possibilities!

You write a realistic piece. I enjoyed reading it. Try putting more dialogue in your love scenes though. It brings about a stronger connection between your lead characters which will in turn lead to a hotter scene. I look forward to reading more from you..smiles.

This one took me back in time. :-)

Subject covered well. Easy to sub myself in narrator's role.

Closing provided excellent segue for a future story.

Will be watching for it.