by James19999
There is a lot more they can all do,always with Tana in charge.Brad could cheat on Mandy who is very distraught and comes crying to Tana who 'comforts'her and with James's assistance reduces Brad to servitude to both women,although it would need more severe methods than were necessary with James,then all four of them could live happily ever after.You may ask why I don't do this myself,but I do not posses the prose skills to convert ideas into erotic fairy tales.
So the only question now - does Tana make Mandy her bitch as well, or do the two them take care of James? Such a hot story, beautifully written.
I hope you continue this series. So much feminization possible... Maybe some discipline to remind James of her place in the relationship. Double dates after easing James into Mandy knowing and then Brad. Anyway... your story, I look forward to reading some more, hopefully soon!
Another brilliant chapter.
Will they always keep the secrets? Assuming she grows to want it, will he gift her with his public commitment? Probably not next week, but maybe in a month or so? What about public cross-dressing - becoming a femboy, embracing himself while giving himself completely to her. Powerful love is in that scene... and scorching hot sex, too.
This was absolutely gold:
"I let out an involuntary gasp of shock as I felt the tip of the strapon enter me again."
Wow.
Would you consider introducing chastity in the next chapters?
Awwww, them both being shy and a little embarrassed absolute made the story. I wish more had build up as good as this, it makes it so much better
Please do you think you can find the time to write another chapter for your army of admirers. It’s so well written you have us all desperate to find out what happens next . Xx
Aww, begging her to keep it secret from Mandy and giving it all away at the same time, the gasps, the moaning, the sonds of being taken. Even if Mandy hasn't guessed it already, she'll soon connect the dots when the lovers meet every other day.
The little things, whose ass get's a patting, who blushes when the talk covers last night's heavy pounding, the soled underwear in the dresser, femme but not Tana's size...
And what's so bad about it? It's what they do, how they are. Sooner or later people will notice. But the uncovering will be delightfully embarrassing.
And while he just isn't Mandy's type, en femme may still find them cute. She may even feel tempted to help, teaching make up and behaviour, take James / Jamie shopping to surprise their lover with a new look.
wish there was another chapter...
Absolutly amazing. Wish the 2 chapters were longer and had more casual interactions between the male lead and the female lead. But other than that, 5/5. Easily. More pls!
great story
possible continuation- Brad takes a liking to pretty James
oh glory to your imagination!!!
I like this story…not over the top, but a simple love story that includes pegging and light femdom. It’s a fun easy read.