by Legman173
you really need someone to proof read your work. Through for threw, etc., etc. I am surprised how little many people do not know thw basics of grammar and word use. I don't understand how one can grow up and never understand the basics of English; telling a verb from a noun, from an article, etc. etc. Still it was a wonderful story that kept the plot plausable and entertaining Definitely a 5. Thank you..
Best story I've read on this site so far. Loved it. God it was amazing. You do need someone to proofread it though lol
As you said you are not a professional writer, good concept but your grammar and spelling are so bad you do not qualify as an amateur writer.
Very good story but the grammar and spelling are atrocious.
Any professional would have someone read and check their work. Not only for spelling accuracy, but grammar, and thought.
Please do the same (even as practice... just to say you did it) before posting again.
Easily the best series that I've read on this website. Be proud of your work, it's truly art.