All Comments on 'Submision on the Subway'

I LOVED It. I LOVE how you write. PLEASE OH PLEASE write more.

It could have been great if you had understood and explained what the flashing was, but we were left to wonder, but crucially you cannot walk a naked slave out of a railway station, leash her yes, put her in a Muslim Burkah or Hibjab with absolutely nothing underneath like we do in england but bpleas don't expect you hero t get away with walking a naked girl out of the railway station. 80%

I look forward to a part 2 to this..I found myself intranced and wanting more...

Hey its fiction..just enjoy..

(and who wouldn't want to be collared by a beautiful Asian woman:)

erotic stories I've ever read. I greatly anticipate a sequel and other short stories by you as well.