All Comments on 'Submission'

5* but I would have preferred lube with the first use.

Brilliant story though, his enjoyment.

Hallo AG31!

Your story was recommended to the Queen and myself by a friend, that really enjoyed it, however she did say it may not be extreme enough for two kinky dykes, but suspected we would still enjoy reading it, and we did!... Thank-You, 5-Stars..

The Black Queen and Gay Kat!

Thanks so much for the comment!

That ending was bittersweetly perfect. So evocative.

Thank you very much. It just came to me. I didn't work on it.

Such silliness, and from a 60 year old….

Vittorio Vittorossi

I really like the solemnity of the BDSM dungeon atmosphere. I've seen videos of things like this but everyone is sort of laughing (nervously?) and talking too crudely. This was so much more pure and I really enjoyed it. You write very well.

Do you detect qualities of self acceptance, self containment in Neil?