All Comments on 'Submission Ch. 06'
by Goldeniangel
- 5 Comments
Anomandarisalmost 12 years agoLoving this story. I hope you post many chapters. :)
joodlealmost 12 years agoYay, another chapter. Somewhat mellow, but super erotic at the same time. The Master is so powerful and you can feel his confidence and strength. Sex or no sex, he is hot! Looking forward to more!
Anonymousover 10 years agoI love your story, it's very sexy!!!!! I have read some of your other stories and they are all amazing! Write a book...I would buy it! congratulations!
Anonymousover 10 years agothis is fantastic, many steps above the average literotica story
fantastic ....
LadySaxonrose0916about 10 years agoI have been trying to find a story like the one in my head for a while now and I finally find you. Thank you so very much!!! Now for the how, How do you take scenes out of your mind and write them so good on "paper" that they seem to be happening for real? My sister can do the same thing. But when I try the words just stay a fantasy. Please tell me there will be more stories. Maybe a time travel Bdsm love story. THANKS AGAIN!!!!!
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