All Comments on 'Submitting To Professor Kent Ch. 02'

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Jaydean409Jaydean4092 months ago

Love the story but proofreading is your friend!!! Stick with one name ( Amber, Beth??), and read the sentences yourself. He fucks her and then, all of a sudden he’s walking her to the bed! Weren’t they already on the bed??? Otherwise, I love it, keep it going!!

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Spend your 20s making a difference, spend your 30s making memories, spend your 40s making love, and spend your 50s making sure you lived the hell out of this life.

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