All Comments on 'Submitting With Sister Pt. 02'

Great story!

I'd love to see Jo and Terry get forced to wear chastity cages, maybe by Skeg or Fiona and Mel...

Hmmm... never actually been much of a fan of chastity cages actually. Just not my kink. Might slip them in at some point, but I'm afraid there now likely won't be an addition to this one for a while, have caught up with the site where it was originally published... in a collection of 'short' stories no less 😆

not getting a sequel to this would be a real shame:(

I would also love to see a continuation of this story, no need to force a fetish you don't have in there though (although I do love sissy chastity)

So Terry is in love with Jo, Jo’s in love with Jenny, and Jenny’s just in love with with this lifestyle? If there’s a sequel, I would really love to see more actual affection and genuine care between the sisters, even if they’re getting fucked before/during/after, than *just* Jenny diving deep and pulling Jo along with her. Either is great, but both would be better.

As written, it feels like Jenny doesn’t really care about her sister much, beyond horniness, and that dynamic kinda puts a damper on an otherwise wonderful story. Maybe more of the honest and genuine conversation, as Jo figures herself out more, or truly confesses what (I think Jenny already knows) she feels?

I love this story, both parts, this is about the only thing that bugs me, it just bugs me more than a bit.

Thank you for your kind words and interest. Yes, I've had the same thoughts about their relationship to be honest. This story was actually first written to be a 'short' story in an incest collection on another site, but as you can tell... took on something of a life of its own. I think when it became more of a personal story for Jo, Jenny just got pushed to the wayside a bit, which left her in an unfortunate hole in regards to character development as more just an environmental hazard than a fleshed out person.

I am, slowly, writing a third part after an even further timeskip, where they all move back into their previous mansion... rented unwillingly by a now bankrupt father. I shall see if I can't do some repair work on their relationship as Jo progresses there... possibly recognising changing feelings toward her twin.

I freaking love this story. Please continue the adventures of these 2 sissy sluts. Have Terry's dad fine out about them,uses; both of them.

cant wait for more