All Comments on 'Subroutine Ch. 11'

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sammy_808 almost 4 years ago

aaaaaaaaaaa! i want to know what's going on so much! can't wait until the next part!

Anonymous11 months ago

I find the use of they and them when referring to Jae. Very distracting and makes the flow of the story harder to follow with no benefit.

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