by Etherealust
Very cool and nicely written. Personally I think it might be slightly better if Lina spoke a little more correctly and android-like, rather than like a 'normal human'.
Well, this was a really hot story about Lina as a doll and with ability to program new functions. Hopefully there will be more play time between the two. I would not like for the programming to be hijacked by someone so that Lina is made into some sex-crazed bimbo doll (but then that would be a good set of action chapters that Kay would be able to rescue Lina). Love the beginning and would like to read more.
In your Biography you hoped that readers could find something suited to their taste in your stories. Well, for one, I’ve enjoyed the erotic tales from your fertile imagination. Must confess that I’ve read the other chapters of this well crafted storyline and now am simply returning to the first to say the potential evident in this first chapter is being realized. Love the main characters, their relationship, the suspense and eroticism. So creative. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️