All Comments on 'Suburban Legends and Voluptuous Women'

The reader is left hanging - Myrna won't tell why she decided to leave abruptly. Will that be revealed in Part 2? Otherwise, this is just a mechanical musical chairs for adults.

In response to your query. I would have loved to written a part II to this story, Unfortunately, with bitter disappointment this episode in my life was true. Sex was still great, after that adventure, but she became very jealous and possessive, possibly why we were wisked away from the party, that evening.

The crushing possessiveness was what lead to our eventual breakup. Never again did I have the opportunity of that particular night.

Check out my other writings, they are all true!

I thought this story had a great premise, and I liked where you were going with it. I'd love more details about the earlier suburban conquests, before Myrna. Flesh out the story a bit, as it were. Hell, take the experience and continue the fantasy, imagining what might have been...