Subway Ride

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Oh god, it hurts so much..." it's so huge."

"I want you to squeeze my cock with your asshole when I pull out."

I obey.

I begin to pull my cock from your asshole.

I squeeze as hard as I can, willing you to cum as soon as possible.

I begin to pull on the clamps, especially the clit clamp. 'I am going to fuck you until you cum so you better soon or I will tear up your asshole.' I pushed my cock into your asshole hard, bottoming in your colon, your anus tearing from my painful fuck. 'Tell them you like it cunt.'

Impossibly, my cunt is getting wet again with the abuse. You are fucking me so hard, the friction making me so hot while you are telling me what a fucking whore I am, because only whores take it up the ass. "I love your cock up my ass." The words are out before I'm aware I've thought them.

"Hey you guys, come over here. Stick the hard cocks in the bitch's mouth. She can take both of you in there. It will be a little tight, but you can fill the sluts mouth with your cum."

I gratefully receive the erect cocks, turning from one to the other while the cock in my ass is hurting me unbearably, deliciously.

"Put them in deep, choke the fucker with them." My cock beginning to fuck your asshole faster and faster, burning up your anal tract. "You ready to cum slut," my fingers pulling on the clit clamp. "Cum for me cunt."

"Put both of your cocks into her mouth at once let her feel what it feels like to be truly stuffed."

Oh god. Oh god. I feel the utter humiliation as I am used by the three of you. I'm feeling my excitement mount.

My fingers pull and push on your clit, the cocks in your mouth going to the back, into your throat, making your gag as they both try to enter your throat at the same time. My cock is enjoying your asshole, your ass clamping down on my cock, ready to cum.

I am finally being used like the slut that I am. I can't believe I ever thought I was better than this.

I am ready to cum, the cum beginning to shoot up from my heavy balls. I push my cock deep into your colon, further than it ever was. I hear the others beginning to cum in your mouth, the sounds of your mouth being filled with hot cum.

"Cum now bitch, or I will beat your senseless."

"I'm cumming for you!"

I shoot your body full of cum, deep into you. I see cum shooting out the sides of your mouth and your nose as you cannot hold all of the cum shooting down your throat.

I feel your asshole trapping my cock, your pussy pulsating as you cum.

I scream and scream, louder than I did with the pain.

My cock empties its cum deep into you. It begins to shrink, still held tightly by your asshole. Your mouth is still filled with the two stranger's cocks.

"Don't take your cocks out of her mouth yet," I tell the strangers.

I'm still shaking with the orgasm, wondering what's to come.

"Piss in her mouth, show her what a piss slut is." My cock begins to give you your first piss enema, filling your colon with my hot piss, mixing with my cum. Their cocks began to fill your mouth with their hot piss.

"Swallow their piss, cunt."

I swallow, feeling I'm being treated the way I'm supposed to.

All of the cocks pull from your body, just as the subway enters the last station. All three of us hurriedly dress and rush out the station. "Take a taxi next time, cunt," we yell, leaving you hanging, naked, cum and piss running off your body.

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merrySMmerrySMover 2 years ago

Loved the premise, super hot, but ditto to what others pointed out. Dual 1st person? What where you thinking.

Logistics were wrong as well, so many flow problems, but could have been hot af.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Could've been good but it jumped from pov to pov without warning or proper pattern.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
horny

yep that made me horny - had someone who kept touching me on my bus ride to work when i was young - it didnt go any further than that but have always wondered what could have happened if it went further - got me stoked and wanting it to happen - now I just read and write about my fantasies - at some point I will have to post some on this site

Bigtits8Bigtits8about 6 years ago

O fuck that’s hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Learn to write

Whatever your chosen language learn to use the proper tense. I then "her", and constant back and forth changes in the same sentence. Ridiculous....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
amazing

You could use an editor, but the visuals and attention to detail make the story. One of the better subway stories. Keep writing!

Rodrigo SanteriaRodrigo Santeriaover 10 years ago
takes a huge effort by the reader to follow this mere outline of a story.

Wow, it's clear English isn't your primary language.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Confusing, but Good

I liked the story... and i liked the way it was described.... but the typos were kind of bad and the double first person thing was very confusing

Johnboy9Johnboy9almost 15 years ago
OK but...

Agreed with most reviewers re: writing style and choice of using second person pronouns for both characters, but was actually able to finally get used to that. Main problem I had was actually at the end when the two guys came up and made the girl suck them off. At that point she was still standing, with hands cuffed to rail above her head. Just how was she supposed to manage to give these guys a blow job in that position? If her position had changed when he cuffed her ankles, it should have been more plainly spelled out so that the reader was aware she was no longer in a vertical position but was now horizontal to the floor. However, it was never stated that those cuffs were ever removed from her wrists or that her wrists were ever cuffed in a different position. Otherwise, intensity of rape scenario was good, despite the format used, although it would have been even greater otherwise. Keep up the writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Like the story but...

I absolutely loved the story... it is hot, inventive, and compelling. However, what on earth made you want to write it with alternating views like that? There is creative license, then there is just plain confusing and unfortunately you fall into the latter. You need to firmly understand the rules before you break them and in this case, the story would have been near perfect if it had just been written in English!

Please, please find an editor... because your story otherwise was excellent. An editor could make it readable as well!

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