All Comments on 'Succubus Master Pt. 14'

Super hot, i love the idea of massively increasing the pleasure they can feel but taking steps to ensure they are aware of it and can't pass out or miss it. That's always been what's put me off about doll stories or bimbo stories where they get completely blitzed out and pass out. Much hotter for them to forcibly experience every iota.

Fun to see him become more comfortable with outright dominating people as needed, and to see the set ups for the next additions to the harem. I assume he's getting pulled over by a lady cop? :D

Great addition to the story line keep going with it.

Obviously it's gonna be a hot female cop...

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You said:

"In my mind, I could recall scenes from both porn and hentai where the female's pantyhose would be ripped from their gussets, and the guy would plow right into the woman's wet sheath."

Crotchless pantyhose - and what the Brits call "suspnder tights" - do exist.

Also, i once dated a girl who had what she called "Seal-a-Meal jeans" - They had a zipper that ran all the way from the waistband in the front to the waistband in the back...

nice!

Great story but why do you publish one story in every 2 months. Please do it more frequently

The pace of releases is very slow and isn't doing the excellent level of writing any favors. I think I understand the Catch 22 that comes from publishing on Lit. I'm sure most readers would prefer a complete story dropped or at least published in just a few releases. The other side of the coin is that if the work is published in smaller pieces, the author can get real time feedback from the readers. The author can either ignore the feedback or use it to guide future chapters. Also, it's my understanding that some authors prefer releasing in serial fashion to increase followers. Perhaps the sweet spot is a hybrid of both where the author gets out ahead of the releases with a buffer of well developed drafts (that can be tweaked from reader feedback) and releases them at a speedier pace.

Great job on the story so far! There might have been a missed opportunity in the office scene. Azura is desperate to prove herself and be of value to her Pack and Pack Master. Why wasn't she in the office scene? Going into an unknown conflict who doesn't want a lycanthrope hell hound as your wing man! Going forward please don't have Azura make the ultimate sacrifice, just don't. She's the last of her kind unless.... On a different note, the MC needs to be rehumanized again and have more interactions in the regular world. The MC is now supernatural but still has a regular life and there should be some good drama balancing the two. Introducing some new "regular" characters would be constructive and deepen the story. Not to mention all the foreshadowing possibilities by doing so!

Great story. Take your time releasing the chapters, as you’re doing something right.

Looking forward to the next part binge read all in the past day can't wait for more

Great Story men thanks for a great read, keep up the great work

Really great story, please continue

this is an amazing story, i really hope you continue with it

Gee, I wonder why he’s being pulled over by the cops. Surely this could not have been foreshadowed earlier when you said the Feminist Book Club of Moira’s had THE CHIEF OF FUCKING POLICE! Little does Moira know, she’s just made Max Above the Law in town. CoP Slave GET!

Great story. Keep up the awesome work

I really enjoyed your story of SUCCUBUS MASTER

I truly hope there is more to come

It seems to me your ending left it open for more to come in the Saga SUCCUBUS MASTER

I hope you continue the story of SUCCUBUS MASTER

And I cant wait to read it when you post it

Please let me know if or you add to this story

Thanks for listing

Your Fan Joseph

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I can't wait for the next installment!

I think Max should take the Victorian house for himself and his slave it would fit them and his expanding harem and is also isolated so Azure can run in animal form and be as kiky as they want also it should be easy to acquire since his mother is in charge of the sell and the owner is subservient to him a

Keep going, I want to know what happens

Any update soon? I want to know what else in this story

Could you make another Part i want to know want Happens next

We need part 15, 16, 17, etc. I just spent 3 days rereading this story, loved it when I first read it and love it even more now. Can't wait to read more its great and only getting better the further you take it.

Any update on the next parts???

I really love this story sure hope there's going to be a continuance

I absolutely love this story! Men on Books gives it "Two snaps in Z formation" (See "In Living Color" for reference). Anyway, wonderful amount of hot, hot, HOT sex and inspiring story line that is moving along. My only bitch is that, I would love to see more, more quickly. But, I understand that this is a free site. I have checked out the author's Patreon site as of s couple months ago, but even there it didn't seem the pace of publishing was moving along. I hope the author continues to write and publish because he definitely is good at what he does.

Great story and I can't wait for more

Please please PLEASE...we need more of this story! We're all far too invested in your story telling abilities...

When will the next part come out?

BEST thing i read on here but it really needs an update man