by oggbashan
Oggbashan, you've done it again. Another skillfully written and imagineered story.
"There are statistics, there are damned statistics and there are succubus statistics!"
I enjoyed the story and pacing, although I was disappointed by the ending. It seemed too happily ever after. I would have preferred for their future to be left open ended, with the point of view character not knowing what the future would bring, but knowing that he wanted it to include the woman who had shown him many kindnesses.
Nice story with a happy ending, and a lesson in statistics too, what more could we ask for?
It would be a better read if you used the term tutoring instead of tuition.