by AlexMarkov
Thanks again Alex Markov . Chapter Two really moved forward as far as story and character development . Chapter three will be even more interesting , no doubt .
The little lady succubus is very likable and a sweetie . Like Demi The Demoness except Demi has all girl parts . I think that Thomas is a lucky fella .
Many thanks ! Regards ... ACH
this is SO CUTE!!! ugh and so sexy and so well written. honestly goals. i really hope you write more of this, although i don't even know what would come next. they go on an awkward movie date? Nymira meets Thomas's parents? Thomas meets Nymira's parents, who are presumably The Devil? they just fuck a bunch more? don't know, don't care, i will definitely be reading it
Very cute story, very well-written, with likable characters. Keep up the good work, you've got talent.