by spider007
After part one, I suggested I might not bother with part 2! I should have heeded my own advice. Got about four paragraphs into this one and it became clear it was just going to be about pushing her to ever more outrageous acts. I suppose it will end with her deep-throating a .45 ACP, but I've learned to listen to me! Adios.
Can't wait to see what happens in the theatre.
I bet people lose interest in the film! :-)
An excellent story although he's being a little too gentle with her. He should start her on rimming.
For the idiots who think this writer knows how to write erotica. Fucking morons.
Isn't that where you got your degree in creative writing? Definitely sucks.