by IvoryOrchid
Your concept of all your stories were nothing new. Only thing different was timing and place. Other than that it was the same old boring idea. Even the sex scenes were so cliche. The dialogues were similar and the endings were just as similar.
Boring indeed.
I liked the fact even though he did rape and hit her. He obviously has very deep feelings for her and I very much hope as you develop this story he is able to show her some tenderness and share some of his feelings. As always I hope for a happy ending. Good work and I look forward to another chapter!!!!!
This story lacked any logic. I know it's a work of fiction, but I find it hard to believe that this girl would just simply avoid him during school, after being raped and losing her virginity to this guy, who obviously has some serious issues. He stalks and is infactuated with her. The first day he saw her he knew they would be together. He stalks her. He thinks she loves him secretly. God.
I loved all your stories and really hope you continue to write. There's a great sexual intensity to them. Will there be a second chapter to Sucked into Obsession?
Great, loved it... But I must know what happens between them next, I hope you won't leave it there.
I just read this today and it was a very good story. Will there be another chapter?
Will there be another chapter to this. I gotta find out if madeline falls in love with him.
Will there be another chapter to this. I gotta find out if madeline falls in love with him.
this was an excellent story...are you planning another chapter for it?
i really want to read about the continuance of their relationship and how madeline resolves her feelings about david... and will he ever tell her how much hes obsessed with her???
I know it's been 3 or 4 years but you got to continue writing this story. I want to know what happens next.