All Comments on 'Sucking Off His Friend at the Beach'

Unexpectedly, this is exactly what I needed. So fine! So Hot!

Wish I had a friend like Albert.

OK, since you asked for feedback here goes. Just so I don't end this on a sour note, let me get the only bad thing out of the way first, and it's not a biggy. Halfway through the first page you messed up the names several times, adding an Arnold that wasn't there and it also read like you mixed up Jesse's actions with Gavin. As far as the story itself, it was very sensual, and it captured the feelings and actions of this age group perfectly. Jesse's character was written particularly well, mirroring the angst that many of us feel at that age if still closeted. Would be nice to read more about this group of friends in a sequel.

Good start with great descriptions! Keep writing!

The boys need a return visit to the beach and I suspect the other boys would prefer it if Albert and Jessie didn't go off to play alone.

@MarcLuciFer, thank you for the feedback. I found myself switching up names the entire time while writing this. I'm embarrassed that even after several edits, these slip-ups still made their way through. I'm glad you enjoyed it despite these mistakes, and I hope to write more about this group later!

Better than a lot of unrealistic, impractical and dirty (in a bad way) rubbish people post on here. Keep 'em cumming. Can't beat a good swallower. Thanks again.

the sex scene was good

Wow what a hot freaking story. Sure got me all horny and hard. I use to go to Blacks Beach here in San Diego California. Unfortunately there wasn’t all that unchanged sex there. Then a gay friend took me to a small beach hidden in Ocean Beach. That beach was harder to get to than Blacks in that you could only enter or leave when the tide was out. Back against the cliffs was a shallow cavern. The ratio of men to women was at least 10 to 1. Most of the guys were gay/bi and if you went into the cavern you were hidden from people on the cliffs so there was some sex.

Your story was excellent and definitely worth 15 hot and hard stars……….. 🤤

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I liked it,it hasnt any macho b.s..Just a few young men enjoying thir sexuality,i was a little disappointes in Albeerts attitude,butI think most of us have had experienced people like him, I give it mucho stars.

I'd love to read the story about Jesse and Derek!!

Very nice. While I never got a good blowjob at Collins Beach, I did get to see some boy on girl sex. And I did get plenty of self pleasure while there. Good story to bring back memories.