All Comments on 'Sudden Attraction'

by Clohi

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Pitch perfect.

Pitch perfect. The foreplay was the buildup. Not enough of that in stories these days.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
nice

the quiet attraction,the slow build.the forceful control of the male,the claiming of the receptive female.lovely story.want to read more.thanks.

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