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legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesover 4 years ago
Closed eyes

You're having sex. It's great. Maybe the best ever. Your spouse/partner's eyes are closed. What is in your spouse/partner's mind? Your spouse/partner is having sex with someone. Who is it? Is it you or someone else? You'll never know. Don't think about it too much. Just enjoy it. You may really never know. Overthinking will ruin it. Such is life and marriage/partnership. Not yours to parse.

You expressed that idea well here, JJ. Five stars.

Bi47Bi47over 4 years ago
WOW

Very very interesting

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 4 years ago
I don't know how

You can pack so much story into one page! You left me (and doubtless everyone else) wondering what, exactly, will happen at the party. We all know Jaeger will be there. Will he even want Karla? Is she used goods, a conquest to enjoy the memory of, but now it's time to move on? Does he routinely rape women or was Karla special in that sense? How strange is Karla to be fixated on her rapist? It does not get much more perverse than this story. You fed us an appetizer and then closed the restaurant before the main course. It's okay; after all, in the best restaurants it's usually the appetizer where the chef's creativity shines. Who cares if we're hungry for more, as long as what we had was delicious. Poor Jason; he's "everyman," isn't he? Thank you, five stars, JB

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good Idea and Well-written

But unresolved and irritating.

Talking to him, risking his feelings, would be far better for him than fucking Jaeger again and hurting him totally. Her choice was just illogical.

'Luscious curves', okay we can use our imagination, but 'long thin legs'? You don't have to trawl the internet for long to know that's a distinctly minority taste among men. Why turn off so many readers unnecessarily?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sequel!

I know most of your stories are one-offs, but this needs a part 2! Or more!

OGHMNWOGHMNWover 4 years ago
She needs to tell Jason

Karla, Really needs to be open and honest with Jason about the rape and situation her feelings. She may be having guilty feelings for enjoying it and maybe causing it with Jaeger. If she’s not open and honest she might as well be a slut. Thank You, Well written story with internal drama.

Tosshhh_Tosshhh_over 4 years ago
Request

I think it would be great if you did sequals to a few of these stories. If any of them had multiple chapters I know id read.

SlutProblemsSlutProblemsover 4 years agoAuthor
This is in my pile of story requests...

You asked. It's cumming. Please give me a few months to add a part 2 to this story. I have some other requests in line in front of this one.

As for luscious curves and long, thin legs, this is just how this character looks. Sorry if that is a turn-off for you, but I do add some descriptions sometimes of characters as I see them when I write the story. This character is tall, thin, with curves. You'll have to work with that because I'm the author and I choose how she looks. Feel free to revise this in your mind with your imagination if you so desire. I will continue to visualize Karla as I see her. Fun fact: In my mind, Karla is a Venezuelan beauty as pictured here: https://ello.co/slut-problems/post/kooxhdltxjqpfjxnh5bc-q

Rancher46Rancher46over 3 years ago

This story had a great start but, I hate it when an author leaves you hanging with a good story that needs a conclusion. Chapter 2 please

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

"give me a couple months to add a part 2"... 4 years ago.. and the cum dumpster has been so busy, she just can't do it... that, or...

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