All Comments on 'Suddenly A Succubus Ch. 05'

The scene where she gets to play a "real" sexy succubus was funny.

Good story. Thanks.

Great stuff. I don't know where you're going with this, but I like the "human side" of Amara becoming a succubus and trying to stay "normal" while her body is turning her into something else altogether. I'm hoping you keep Amara likable and relatable so that she doesn't become a victim of her own growing powers. 25 stars and counting.

Not too many twists in the plot please.

Putting the references to magic in the beginning of this chapter didn't work. No continuity. I thought at first you had skipped a chapter. The dreams are OK, but keep the flow going.

Loving this story so far always look forward to it being posted

Loving this, please keep up the good writing.

You are doing great! There is a reason that these things are happening. You have a good pace going with the revelations and different perspectives and viewpoints. I agree with everydaymagic about Amara holding onto her humanity while dealing with the changes her body (and spirit?) are going thru. Keep it up. Keep writing!

great story line, looking forward to more and see how it develops

Ok I like how you feeling explained how she was trapped & hie her friend saved her.

You could have set up a minor villain here, but instead you seem to have squandered him.

oh thank god I WAS SO WORRIED 😫