All Comments on 'Suddenly Single Steffie Ch. 04'

Hunka Hunka Burning love.... what a fantastic end for now. Please write more!

that was great! i would love to see more about jack and steph, and even calvin too. thank you.

Believable, raunchy, but ... somehow still respectful and sweet.

This was absolutely amazing and I think you should add a girl next time

Nice and very hot story. Thanks xxx

AMAZING!! Loved everything in it except the outside scene. I PERSONALLY found that part extremely disrespectful and hard to read.

He should have NEVER let anyone see/touch her body the way he let the store guys without VERBAL consent. Ever. That lets them think they have a right to touch her like that whenever they want and increases the chances of her being assaulted. Verbal consent is extremely important.

Although I loved everything else IN it, there was one extremely important part that was completely left out. Safety. Perhaps I've just forgotten or missed it while reading, but not once did I see any mention of a safe word, and their was NO aftercare in it. Fictional or not, both are extremely important and it's not safe to project a BDSM lifestyle (bc of the bondage included) without either. The safe word is to protect you, without that, sex in general but ESPECIALLY bondage is very dangerous. And aftercare is to protect you mentally, emotionally, and physically. Telling any kind of BDSM story without those send the message that it's not needed, which is an astronomically toxic unsafe mindset that shouldn't be sent out, ever.

The lack of all that almost made me quit reading but I wanted to know if they cared for her in a romantic light. But aside from that, the book was well written, had enjoyable characters, an enjoyable plot, it was the perfect length and all together really fun to read. I'm not trying to hate on it or make you feel bad, and I apologize if I have, I just strongly believe in constructive criticism. You're a talented writer, and if you manage to fix those little errors/learn from them, I'd become a fan for life. All in all, 9.5/10 stars.✨