All Comments on 'Sue: Her Night Out'

That's a good piece of erotic literature

Because of your use of a blindfold on your "heroine" the story became disjointed and confusing & truth be told there really wasn't any need for the blindfold once she was on stage.

great story I wish I was Don. Will there be a part II?

I normally like your style but, while the story line was excellent, your dialogue was somewhat confusing. Your use of the 'first person' necessitated frequent use of a 'third person' to keep our heroine in the picture - not the best of style! I gave you full marks for the very entertaining story line! Pete.

stuff dreams are made of.... but what a story, one ive dreamt of thats for sure.

Welcome to the big city!

Boyd

wonder how many guys have been strocking,while reading this erotic story and cum before its end.

Just like me !

Great

Keep it up

okay, i got off like three time thanks to that one story! omg thank you! i know what i'm reading from now on!!! *wink wink*

Although somewhat unrealistic, I found your story to be very erotic. It has long been a fantasy of mine to see my wife, Marianne, used in front of an audience and become the subject of lust and desire for a large group! Keep up the good work.