All Comments on 'Sugar Daddy'

I'm retired ... and damn! Where was that park?

Oh, yeah, there it is. And just like Fleetwood Mac said, when i drove up she said

"well i need a sugar daddy

he could be my friend

and if i needed money

i know he would lend me a hand"

Nice job!

Regards, DJ

the characters react like robots, w/o emotion. need to work on that.

A fantasy of every retired, horny single guy.

Boyd

MMMMMMMMMM this was sooooo hot. I need to find me a sugar daddy like this who will satisfy me sexually!

5 for you and yes, you should work a bit more on developing the dialog and expressed feelings.