All Comments on 'Sugar Daddy'

Please do more I'm hard a as fuck right now

Please continue.

Just getting good please carry on.

I need to have her feather my tight balls while she tugs my hard cock...

I will tongue her butt hole.....more plesse

Please keep going....+++

I see a lot of potential in this story keep on trucking tenbears43

Seems like a lot of talk lost me half way through..keep going

You should be inspired to extend this tale.

Very captivating:) lets get on with the next chapter!

Well staged and presented.... Keep it going

I get the feeling of a start of a CHUBBY!

By all means, this flower is ready to be plucked. I hope to read of her failure in obedience that earns her some physical reprimand before she gets tucked in for bed this evening. Then she needs to see just how sweet this Sugar Daddy is by taste testing his lollipop.

The newspaper ad is a great beginning. Immediately, caught my attention. The descriptions of the mansion, the servant, and the demanding older man are limited but sets the stage very well. The dialogue is right on. The repartee between the protagonists is befitting the story. The lead in to a sex scene, plucking the flower, is excellent. As you can tell from the other comments you have scored a 10, maybe in this case a 5. Well written, great story, looking forward to the second chapter.

Great start, well told. This could be the beginning of many great chapters.

Onward, please

Can't wait for part 2, as an older guy not much younger than the main character, this had me well aroused.

I truly enjoyed ur story and look forward to reading others you have written

I bet you there are situations like that one happening every day all around the world. Please write the second chapter.

GREAT.

This is a very good start for a looong story - at least that's my hope.

pleassssssssssssse write another chapter and another and another etc

I want to hear so much more about how she submits to his desires.

this looks like a very good start ! more [please.

The worst !

Silly and predictable

So the basic premis may be simple and familiar, but that hardly matters. What matters is that this is well written, the characters are well drawn, and this is both fun and sexy. Yes, both of them are looking to use the other, but so long as they are happy and getting what they want from the situation, that is purely their business. I really do enjoy the sexy feeling of their interaction, and the sense of plenty more fun in the wings, just waiting to happen :)