All Comments on 'Sugar Sand Cay'

...ruins what was otherwise a great story. No idea why you thought introducing a stupid supernatural / sci-fi ending to a story that had been about exploring feelings up to that point was a good idea, but it jarred so bad, it invalidated the good stuff that went before.

Also there was a sequel crying out to be written about Michelle's reaction to her aunt sleeping with her girlfriend. That's out of the question now.

Defeat snatched from the jaws of victory.

This was awesome and you wrote the characters quite well, but then a weird twist ending? I’m all about it. More to come I hope?

Curious for more

It was a great story. But a very WEIRD ending.

So, uhh... you're working on a sequel, right? Because the time travel ending is way too weird to leave as a cliffhanger.