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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Almost a great story

I really loved the first half and the twist. I'm sorry but I didn't like what she did with the twist. It felt like there was nothing good at the end. I would have liked her to have either kept that machine or changed what he does with it. I'm sorry but I don't feel like making him even worse of a man helps mankind or arouses Literotica readers.

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Burnt Feathers writes stories of SciFi, Historical, Mind Control, Fetish and Seasonal Erotica.