All Comments on 'Sullivan's Power'

Short sharp and intense

Bring it on!

Way back the mid 80s, I read a novel called RHEA by Russ Martin, and from that point on I was hooked! I've been a tremendous fan of your work, but Sullivan's Power truly is a MASTERPIECE! Controlling females through sexual hunger and rendering them a slave to their passion is HOT and I would love to add this tale to my JR Parz Hall of Fame reads! Please tell me there is more coming in this universe.

Mind control, not non-con.

Personally I'm all for a bit of reluctance, but a story like this is hardly in the proper category. Anon has it right. This is Mind Control, not really Non-Consent and with the "I'm not even going to try to explain the hocus pocus", it isn't even good mind control. It's lazy is what it is.

Given I know a thing or two about quality erotic mind control, I have to totally disagree with Verb... , who said it wasn't. Take it from an authority - you hit a GRANDSLAM homerun with this tale.

Would love it if you would finish that story story somehow.

Your story was fantastic! Although it may fall into a mind-control category, it doubles as non-consent/reluctance. She is sooo unwilling and horrified, but somewhat pleased and satisfied. Awesome job! I hope you'll publish more relating to this work!

My only comment would be a question. How is this stupid shit not in mind control?

Theme starts well but could you not have not imagined some reason why she went from determined prosecutor to compliant sex slave?

Inane? Actually calling him Sir, not Master. This unexplained, almost mystical mind control reasons never work for this type of story.