All Comments on 'Summer Beach'

by Shaw_Watson

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mrpervy46mrpervy46over 12 years ago
What, Incest ?

I am just wondering what makes this an incest story. I mean Ralph and Lee were not in it enough for it to be an incest story, and Mary & John just seemed to be a normal couple.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
bad

no incest with the main charicters and adding the foursome ruined the story use your head and delete this and do a major rewrite total waste of time

imurddyimurddyover 12 years ago
funny

I agree with them, in a way, but not completely. It has potential, but the main characters should be bro n sis, meeting another bro n sis.

But congratulations, and remember, the longest book is the one that is never written!

Shaw_WatsonShaw_Watsonover 12 years agoAuthor
wow this was in the wrong genre

okay so people who thought that this was supposed to be in the incest section should be reinformed, I never put it there the damn site did... yeah I know, even my Irish friend, Lil, was laughing harder than a drunk Irish comedian.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
Perhaps they both were adopted

And only found out they were brother and sister after having their first child.

Anyway, it was a good read and I enjoyed it.

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