by Shaw_Watson
I am just wondering what makes this an incest story. I mean Ralph and Lee were not in it enough for it to be an incest story, and Mary & John just seemed to be a normal couple.
no incest with the main charicters and adding the foursome ruined the story use your head and delete this and do a major rewrite total waste of time
I agree with them, in a way, but not completely. It has potential, but the main characters should be bro n sis, meeting another bro n sis.
But congratulations, and remember, the longest book is the one that is never written!
okay so people who thought that this was supposed to be in the incest section should be reinformed, I never put it there the damn site did... yeah I know, even my Irish friend, Lil, was laughing harder than a drunk Irish comedian.
And only found out they were brother and sister after having their first child.
Anyway, it was a good read and I enjoyed it.