All Comments on 'Summer Blackout'

Wow! Great story thank you

Very nice!

good job!! I enjoyed the lead up as well as the ending,

Love your story. Wish to have someone like you.

Sweet story of a caring true friendship.

Would been better if he and Stacy ended up in the relationship!

Excellent! My only suggestion is to get rid of as many proper nouns as possible. When the story is about just 2 people you don't need to keep using their names. Other than that, you did a great job.

Nicely done!

I am joyed the whole story, please continue!

Should have asked the girlfriend/ wife if she wanted a go. Never know , you might still be having fun. And she might teach the 2 of you something ! Good job tho.

Neighbors, sometime make great sounding boards, just a thought you might use in the future. Liked your story and enjoy your telling of it keep up the good work. Like the way you write and tell a story.

I SINCERELY laughed at the exaggerating comment saying that they "am joyed" it!

I SINCERELY stopped after about the third mistake (couldn't count them ALL), but you really lost me after warning of the long buildup & the main character stating that he'd "been the building" for a while!

Hmm. It would have been nice if both of them had had his come dripping down their legs at the wedding. But after that, no more — of course!

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Top Shelf!

11/10!!!!!

I enjoyed it. You developed your characters, created a story line, and finished with a climax.