All Comments on 'Summer Camp'

lol I love a dubious plot. looking forward to the next one

Interesting start but so short!! Keep going please!

Good start. Can’t wait for the next part.

Good start and I hope you continue with the nude summer camp story!

Nothing worse than when a writer can’t keep his own character’s names right. His name is Don, then a paragraph later his name is Dave, which gets confusing.

Good story line. Can’t wait to find out what happens next. Keep up the good work.

To: Anonymous. Thanks for pointing out my error (inadvertently changing "Don" to "Dave" mid-story). Funny - this story has been online for a couple of years, at least, and you're the first to let me know. I've made an attempt to edit the story to correct this. I've never tried editing a posted story before, so hope it works.

Can’t wait to read more! Love your stories

too short

Hot story. It would be nice to know what happened to Brian that summer. Was the game with Brian's „balls” (testicles) included in the ball games of the camper teens? :)

Another vote for it to continue! Lots of potential fun forks for the story to go.