All Comments on 'Summer Camp Ch. 01'

Good Build up to whatever lies ahead. Keep it up.

I'll never understand some people. This IS a good build-up to whatever comes next, and one can only hope that what comes next comes soon. It's hard to believe you're a UK writer; there are usually clues that a Yank can pick up on (aside from style and skill) that give you Brits away.

Ignore those who are here only to read about the sex. Apparantly their not getting any so they cum to literotica to read about it. There are 1,000's of stories on here they can read if all they want is sex & they dont have to leave rude comments when they dont get it. My advice to auther is keep going. My advice to those leaving neg feedback because no sex in part 1, get a life and real sex is so much better than reading about it.

I like the way the characters are introduced and described and how the relationship is established.