by MariaTrans694U
Loved the original and the sequel and if you continue our girls adventue I'll love that one too!
I really liked the story.
I have one edit for you and it’s a big one.
All of the story the female actress was named “Sarah”. Suddenly as you were wrapping things up you changed her name to “Sophia”.
It happened at this line, “ Sophia had her leg out of the cast and was preparing to move to New York.”
Thanks for your creativity. I look forward to reading some of your other stories.