All Comments on 'Summer Changed My Life - The Sequel'

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Love what a confident woman Jamie has become! Will there be more?

JulieDraperJulieDraper4 months ago

Brilliant sequel. I look forward to more stories from you.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Loved the original and the sequel and if you continue our girls adventue I'll love that one too!

piedadpiedad5 days ago

I really liked the story.

I have one edit for you and it’s a big one.

All of the story the female actress was named “Sarah”. Suddenly as you were wrapping things up you changed her name to “Sophia”.

It happened at this line, “ Sophia had her leg out of the cast and was preparing to move to New York.”

Thanks for your creativity. I look forward to reading some of your other stories.

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