All Comments on 'Summer Chores'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hot Story of a Teen Losing His Virginity

I love these kind of short reads..especially when well written as this was. Hot, Sexy fun, that was right to the point without feeling rushed!! Keep up the good work !

chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Nasty Read***

Thanks for sharing.

amoroneamoroneover 3 years ago

In theory, it was a great idea and well executed but I would recommend you get an editor as spelling mistakes can be off-putting.

BoytitsBoytitsover 3 years ago

Oh my was that hot , I am glad that you are writing a *5* from me on this one!

HuskyoneHuskyoneover 3 years ago

Very nice, thank you.

Randy56rRandy56ralmost 3 years ago

The best I've read in a while, spelling and grammar aside. Wish I had this type of experience when I was at that age.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Damn when she had him eat her out after he came in her just ruined it for me. 2/5

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