All Comments on 'Summer Fun Ch. 05'

by enchantedone

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
AAAAWWWWSSSSOOOOMMMMEEE

That says it all. Keep it cummming, kinkier & sloppier. I can't wait to see if the girls get double or triple stuffed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
sloppy about covers it

Your writing is, quite simply, horrid. There are so many typos and grammatical errors, I could not finish. Have you considered a career at Wendy's? They have pictures of the menu items on the keys and you won't have to read or write.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Keep it cumming

Carry on the good work, I truly enjoyed reading it and cant understand why anyone would complain over a couple of typos.

Cant wait for the next chapter !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
had me hard

can't wait for some colour to be added, had me hard from the first story keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Black and white is allright

A great theme flows very nice,czn,t wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
good.

Just my style. I didnt like when you put in the black guy. Thats why i only gave you 4 stars. Other than that AWESOME series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Sequel

Please finish this story....

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Finish

Good story would like to see a conclusion

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