All Comments on 'Summer Heat'

by jefferson7

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Well written

A nice piece of writing. I thought you raised the temperature at a good steady pace and the boy's reaction at the end was credible (for once!).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Perfect

Brilliant - and true erotic writing at it's best.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
No sex?

Not bad, but nobody got fucked!

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