All Comments on 'Summer Heat Ch. 01 - Surprise'

Good job more of this story please. Please keep the chapters nice and long, it allows your readers to slip into the world your creating and it tends to get your higher ratings. It helps to take the time to reread your chapters at least twice before posting. I would also suggest you get an editor because sometimes we don't catch mistakes cause our brain fixes and fills in the gaps. It's been proven that all most people's brains need is the first and last letter to be correct and your brain fills in the rest without us even knowing it.

Love the story.

W hat an exciting fantasy.

Can't wait for the next chapter

I’m sure your story might be good but your introduction put me off somewhat. Fun other than monogamy doesn’t have to involve deceit.

nice dialogue too .."...You're a master of the obvious, babe...."

And that her bigger-boobed bff is also an ace fellatrix -very nice for him, somewhat rare, in my experience.

Looking forward to following chapters!

PS tho agree with last comment, regarding preface to this chapter