All Comments on 'Summer Holiday Camping'

Hoping there is a second chapter to this in the pipeline ??

Wonderful romantic debut story - I too would be very interested in reading more of their lives together

More, please.

Loved it. Need more though please

Very well written .Some spot were rushed.The sex was ok but like I said rushed.Just write the rest will fallow.

This was a really enjoyable story for me. I hope you'll continue it, the main characters seem to be excellent for each other and I'd love to see them together long-term. In any case THANKS for sharing!!

Thank you for a well-constructed story. Interesting characters and nicely paced development. I'd be interested in seeing where life takes these two for another couple of chapters. Well done!

Great story! Could use a follow up.

5

You made me look up two words! Excellent. Thanks for a great read.

Really enjoyed this and I’m hoping for more.

Not many stories I feel deserve another chapter but this is definitely one of them?

A really great start! I hope you continue…stories like this are exactly why I like ‘a slow burn’….

This was a well balanced story, fun, humour, loving sex and healing of old wounds. And all done in a lovely camp setting. Well done, 5 stars

Ditto on previous "more" please

Really enjoyed this, the conversations especially, seems like you rewrote some of them many times to get the flow working.

You are a good storyteller. The characters felt like real people, as a the wrong was lovely. I hope that you will tell use mote tales!

I very muck liked your story. Follow it up

This was really nice. I'm glad you took your time with them getting together. I suspect they will see each other once back in civilization, may or may not work out there. But a nice memory for them both

Really enjoyed the story and great to see yet another Kiwi writer on the site

Clever New Zealand story with only one clear clue that it is in Godzone.

Welcome to the site and thanks for sharing you’r story here. Very good and I hope it continues.

Excellent story, well written, good Character development and realistic. Good Work!

Great story. Sounds like a camp site I should be searching for in my travels around this amazing country of ours.

Great story. I had thought it might be set in Oz until the weta appeared in the story.

NZ is a favourite place, second only to West Coast Canada.

I have to say how much I appreciate all your positive comments about my first story, and I am thrilled you enjoyed it. I do have a number of other stories coming along, at various stages of development but I hadn't considered a sequel to this one; I am now, though. Time is a valuable commodity, one of which I do not have much available for my writing, but I am working away as and when I can. Keep in mind, you can't rush a good thing.

Awesome! Please write more!

Loved it 2nd book please

Wonderful story, very well written. I had to google what the heck a "Weta" was, and found a really big Fat Grasshopper looking Bug. Is that what the elits want to feed us common folks? Five stars, and hoping there's more to come.

I liked the attitude of caring consent with lust. They obviously wanted each other but only if and when it could happen with respect and decency. Very rare and refreshing … and only serves to simmer and build the heat. Keep writing please!

Loved it!

A wonderful and rich read.

PS: I am a big fan of Dick Francis, as well !

(And of course Nevil Shute.)

Well written….easy flowing …while having depth and character ..keep writing please