by TheLobster
mas lenceria por favor y que se agregue la madre. esl capitulo siguiente de la historia anterior lo vas a postear? Gracias
Why is it rare to find a submission with even the tiniest bit of creativity?
Seriously, why bother if you're going to tell the same story already posted on this site hundreds, if not thousands of times?
This tripe is possibly the MOST overused plot in all of incest erotica. "Oops, I saw my brother/sister masturbating, so let's fuck." Yeah, this is the first time somebody thought of THAT. Nope, sorry. Think up your own plot before you get anything more than the 1 star you deserve for your total lack of thought.
It was erotic but for me super funny as well which made it feel very short. Can't wait to see more.
Great first chapter. Just keep it to the brother and sister and it'll just get better. Add the mom in and you'll just ruin the story. 5* for now. But 1* if you add the mom or anyone else.
Very fucking hot story! When you introduced Mom I thought it was going to be a girlfriend! You need to hurry with part II!
Great premise.
Starts beautifully.
Nice buildup.
But once sex starts it's as if it's in a rush to orgasm/s.
Needed to slow down.
Needed to be more beievable. His first cum while she watched him jerk off was as if A QUART OF MILK HAD BEEN POURED ON HER BODY? Huh? Awwww, cmon.
She certainly should have offered to jerk his cock for him and see if it felt better than when he did it himself.
Some playing with his balls would have been nice.
No blowjob?
No titty fucking?
No eating her pussy so7 he could learn how to do it properly?
Whole business with mother being agreeable seems so false. So unreal. So quick.
Four stars for the buildup.
Needed her
AMAZING. Please continue. This can go 100 different ways, and mom should eventually be part of it.