by TheLobster
Noooo, you're killing me with this cliffhanger!
Great story and I can't wait for chapter 3
Can’t wait for part 3! Love your writing style, great classic Literotica stories and plots. Keep up the great work
Still a good premise.
But erotic? Nope.
It's just a listing of a series of sex acts.
Gave up toward the bottom of page 2.
Two stars.
He must be acknowledged as the MAN OF THE HOUSE & claim Mommy as his other slut. Confiscate their birth control & start breeding his new wives. It's cumming up baby bump time. Bring us the next part! 5☆
Oh more please. You need to keep this going. Please don't leave us hanging.
I'm with the others on this. This was a tease chapter. Chapter 3 needs to include the mom.
Apart from that, you write well. One suggestion for future stories is pacing. Don't be in too much of a hurry to get to the (ahem) climax.