All Comments on 'Summer Inside His Sister Pt. 02'

by TheLobster

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laughdruidlaughdruidabout 1 month ago

It's taking to long to get mother involved.

MiniwandMiniwandabout 1 month ago

Noooo, you're killing me with this cliffhanger!

Great story and I can't wait for chapter 3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Absolutely great! Loving the series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Tease chapter. Fuckin A man ready for chapter 3!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Can’t wait for part 3! Love your writing style, great classic Literotica stories and plots. Keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Still a good premise.

But erotic? Nope.

It's just a listing of a series of sex acts.

Gave up toward the bottom of page 2.

Two stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

He must be acknowledged as the MAN OF THE HOUSE & claim Mommy as his other slut. Confiscate their birth control & start breeding his new wives. It's cumming up baby bump time. Bring us the next part! 5☆

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Nice story, but needs a real ending. Mom needs sex also.

Frankie1952Frankie1952about 1 month ago

Oh more please. You need to keep this going. Please don't leave us hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I'm with the others on this. This was a tease chapter. Chapter 3 needs to include the mom.

Apart from that, you write well. One suggestion for future stories is pacing. Don't be in too much of a hurry to get to the (ahem) climax.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Can't wait for Part 3

RustyReaderRustyReaderabout 1 month ago

Well done...looking forward to the next chapter. Bravo

MilothatchMilothatchabout 1 month ago

Absolutely great! Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Like everyone else, I'm waiting for Mom to get involved.

muskyboymuskyboy26 days ago

Just a teasing chapter, you are better than this....

AnonymousAnonymous25 days ago

Waiting for the return of part 3. Vanished just as I clicked on the link! 😕

Sex4lf57Sex4lf5724 days ago

Very hot! Can't wait to see what happens next. Five stars and a favorite point!

jmfh1955jmfh195523 days ago

A couple ready for chapter 3 Please add to this hot story !

unclemerv77unclemerv7721 days ago

loved it, when can we expect the next chapter?

stockingnutstockingnut20 days ago

So hot! Please continue!

TigersmanTigersman17 days ago

Loved it!! Keep writing.

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I take the dirty parts of my mind and attempt to distill them in a written form. In many cases the outcome won't be very plausible, but that just means I found it fun to indulge in some preposterous fantasy. At this point I'm still exploring various themes and ideas. Past per...