All Comments on 'Summer Job'

i sure hope i domt have to curse the heavens when im bangin ,my niece or aunt, i dont think its mandatory ,but well written Bravo

negative story. no smiles, no happiness, no joy.

why start out on the dark side?

Hot and forbidden. Not a bad combination. Hope you will write a bit more normal stuff before going into BDSM.

my 34yr old aunt abig nat tit j-lo dbl took to doing house work naked knowing it was her n mei was at the age the crack of dawn got me hard being the spin off of granpa her dad my packaga 6thick inchs limp 10erect she loved teasing me then fri noon she inters my rm as i sniffed a dirty pair of her pantiesand j-off shemade me suck the black dildostrap on she buttfuckedme then she mademe suck the eggman who del eggs to her he had 13inch cock blacker than black name otis he loved wine inever addmited he had the best tasting sperm everhe pick me up at school daily buttfuck me my hor aunt sold me to a total of 26 niggers all over 45 thatbeganiwas10im 45 stilllove sucking/getn buttfucked only bigdick i want in me blackdick im no homo ive swallowed 1000gal of nigger cum so far i gottenbuttfucked by 5000huge cock niggers thanks to my cockwhore aunt sylvia whos stillkikin

...found it totally implausible that the nephew would even remotely consider charging off to inform his uncle and ruin a relationship.

That part and the insistence in his own mind that he should, lost it for me.

Everything else.....was great.😊🙏😊

Did someone say this was well written? Can they not read?

You started off in past tense then changed to present tense.

I stopped reading.

It's no good trying to write a hot story if you can't write.

You need to read better stories and learn how they are written .

(11/18/2022) While I like strong women, I’m not into being dominated by them, not my cuppa tea. If the tags had alluded to her dominance over Dave I would have passed this Narrative by. This wasn’t Femdom by any means so I did what I would normally do in a situation like this. I put it out of my mind used my imagination and continued reading. I’m not a member of the grammar police so I’m not considering any hiccups as I read. The sex was hot but I can’t say that I loved it so I gave this narrative four stars.