All Comments on 'Summer Job Leads To More'

Well, this will get interesting. I suggest you read your work out loud and those pesky miss words will be caught before publishing. The ones that spell n grammar seem to overlook.

More chapters, please!

More please, this could get really hot n sexy if they keep going. Please write more of these two.

I really, really enjoyed this story. It was well written and had a good balance between descriptions, dialogue, and just being hot. The foundations for sequel stores is absolutely there, so I definitely hope you'll write more!

Short and sexy

But Erotic

Can’t wait for the follow up

Agreeably this is a stupid comment, but all us carpenters out there would love to tell you, you start drywalling at the top of wall. so if you changed story so they gradually get temped while on the later by changing place throughout the room for him to get top row of screws it would be more believable to us in the know. I do love the story, just my two cents

Stuck in a winter cabin was way better than this. I’m all for short stories but you can’t get far with this one. **

Twin sister, but she's obviously been precocious, since she already has her own place while her lazy ass brother can't be bothered to do anything.

"but we quickly got into a rythm ..."

'rhythm'!