All Comments on 'Summer Love'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow

I am currently a virgin with a serious girlfriend and I was just in awe. Great story. I would love to read more in the future

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great!!!

Really loved the story!

Good details, but try to elaborate and draw things out a bit more. Otherwise really really good!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Lovely ...

fantasy ... unless you lived it ... a really tender story ... paced just right.

lonelyQuadlonelyQuadover 9 years ago
nice job...but

took me back to my first time but not hers... however i still enjoyed it

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10over 8 years ago
Coitus

Interupus. Ho Hum

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Beautiful story

A soft, wonderful love story. Fabulous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Very romantic

Its feels like they were made for each other.

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