by Mylovelyfantasies
I am currently a virgin with a serious girlfriend and I was just in awe. Great story. I would love to read more in the future
Really loved the story!
Good details, but try to elaborate and draw things out a bit more. Otherwise really really good!!
fantasy ... unless you lived it ... a really tender story ... paced just right.
took me back to my first time but not hers... however i still enjoyed it