by L.A. Wicker
good but you need to take a chill pill you won't get or keep many readers if you continue ranting before each story you have to either accept that some people may not like your stories or stop accepting public and private comments this was good but your little speach at the begining put a real damper on it
hey, great story in sense but please dont make them talk like that. like how ya doing, aint ya iffin whatcha and stuff, it sounds like their farmers and i dont think ppl get turned on by farmers lol
the writers tirade at the begining ruin what could have been a very good story. because of the tirade it gets a negative 20 vote if he doesn't like bad comments he needs to either write better stories usin=g a good editor before posting or STOP WRITING.
I think overall you do a fine job tell the critics to take a flying leap.It's kind of hard to talk exactly like a sutherner see what i mean .Some of us do say hawg,dawg,lawg and frawg.Of course we know how to pronounce it correctly and do on occasion .Like the people of Boston say caa for car.Well enough of my input good work and get after it.
i gave it 5 stars. it reminded me of one of my fav TV shows - "The Beverly Hillbillies". and who wouldn't want to shag Ellie Mae!!!