All Comments on 'Summer Loving'

I hadn't read the original, but this is good and you've done a good job of capturing the difficulties of the intelligence, coupled with the anxiety and difficulties in social situations. The way you have written him is also rather autistic, which you've mentioned, so I hope you do follow along those lines, because it make sense.

But it's defintely 5 star worthy for that reason and for the way you portray the effect that normal sociable people have on this type of person, as well as those people's cluelessness about how to deal with it.

I gave it 5 stars for the buildup now i am ready, willing and able to read the resolution as soon as you can write it. good story

I like this please post part 2.

Absolutely love this one, and it deserves many more chapters.

Please, more? Vested interest.

Where is part 2? There has to be a part 2.

Five stars….

Sorry but your story flow is awkward and you protagonist is a dick!

Flow is off, difficult to follow who is talking - no names just Bitch One and Bitch Two... and I really wanted to like it. I am at a loss as to what it needs other than a complete rewrite.

Great story fun to read a fun to follow can’t wait to see what he does next and how Maddie cures him.

so tired of great part ones having no part two. thank you . very happy really enjoying this.