All Comments on 'Summer of My Awakening'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Superb

Great build and I loved the 'dirty' talk. Fun.

Above average writing for this site.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleabout 12 years ago
Yes

Great story and writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Above average writing for this site?

oh common. any dumber and you can say every 19 year old is a future fucktoy with the lowest possible ob selfesteam.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

I liked the build up. The balcony, the sounds, the glances.

thanks.

CajunBillCajunBillabout 12 years ago
More

Well done. Surely you can keep our young visitor for another Italian adventure. ~CajunBill

jorgejmjjorgejmjabout 12 years ago
You Took Me With You

You had me at the description of the hallway. Then you drew me in. Excellent job. The sights and sounds came alive.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

i keep checking to see if you wrote a continuation for this one hehe :D please write a continuation :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Name

Daniele is definitely a male name in Italy. The female version is Daniela.

However I appreciated very much the work.

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