All Comments on 'Summer’s Revelations'

Nice fantasy even though I would have liked more character development of Karl. And if Susan and Karl progress to thinking about marriage...they should seek premarital counseling to avoid another miserable marriage and divorce. 5 Stars.

I know it's only a fantasy, but good fantasy stories have an element of reality and possibility. This doesn't.

i liked the plot. its fiction, after all. i wish the tease could have been a little longer, but i really enjoyed this story. the sex scenes are great! I hope you write a chapter 2. there's a lot you can do with this.