by 4glory6
good thing the youngest boy is excited about staying in the basement all night by himself because he sure is going to get to..
The reader either has to dislike everyone (maybe just half-dislike Troy/Tony, so far), or like 'em all! I think I'll dislike the (post-pubertal) lot of them!
What a hoot. At least one more twist than I anticipated. Best of luck in the contest.
In medias res is not good everytime method for more charcters story. A little longer story plot could help understand better who is who. It was a little disturbing writting.........BTW I know a married pair, who live happy life and they were step siblings...........
Quite the little Peyton Place eh? Need a core card to see who is fucking who because apparently they don't all know for sure either.