by TenderBottom
Love at first sight?
It didn't take long for Ian and Ashlee to get into bed together. Wish I had a voice like his and could strum a guitar. Good story.
Very well told fantasy. I liked the device of having both tell part of the story.
Say "so what?" to the criticism. Stories don't have to be realistic.
R.
The world doesn't really work that way. Summer doesn't last forever and May and December relationships don't last either. But for a few minutes it's nice to think it's possible. 4* for trying.
Love the mood and feel of this story. It carries a sensuality with it. Heady only begins to describe it. Please keep writing!