All Comments on 'Summer that Changed Everything'

Great pre-amble, looking forward to reading more.

Great start, I will be reading more. .

Great start, I will be looking for second chapter

Nice start. Looking forward to the next chapter!

A good start.

Very enjoyable and looking forward to the next chapter

Your first story has got my interest

Thank you all for all of the feedback. The support is much appreciated! Didn’t think so many would enjoy the story. I’m working on chapter 2 now and hopefully it’ll be up in the next coming days. This will be a long series if it continues to be enjoyed.

I WILL MOST ASSUREDLY BE AWAITING THE NEXT INSTALLMENT OF THIS ADVENTURE. PLEASE DO NOT BE LONG IN KEEPING US WAITING FOR IT TO BE POSTED. GOOD LUCK AND THANKS

This is written at a 6th grade level it needs a lot more work.

Not a bad story. Who knows, maybe he can get her pregnant? One of those "unexpected and unplanned pregnancies."

Hey guys! Sorry for the delay in stories. I was working on part 2 then had some negative feedback for the first part that made me pause, then just got really busy.

What would you like to see in this series? I have tons of ideas but want to listen to my fans too. I can take it any route.